Shoes Lyrics Lil Wayne

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Feb/10
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rap fans need your help?

ok ive been rapping a little spit rap Now.I perfectley.i a little like Lil Wayne and Kanye mixed. (but people tell me why) and my lyrics are great (in my opinion), but I need your help to tell me if it's good. unstopbable ideological trying to be so in my case life is impossible struggles of people of impeccable United Nations appreciated ungratefull Allways Allways hated congradulated said youll never if you have not made such a declaration which is a disgracement to act as stiff as if you have a facelift, but the mind of the people is soemthing people love to play with them because they have been a big change in worknig and still havent shh economicaly fact paved hasint world its sad that when you look through the madness, when all the worlds you see is, kill, die, and trying to chaos and that rivers, lakes and oceans of tears Wirl the world and treat it like a bra girl i hope she has a name of Mother Nature

looks good … I would change "always said you'll never be welcomed, even if you did" get the more sense then havent then " act as stiff as if they received a facelift "I would switch to the action got stiff as a face lift … like get and put, such as keeping good work

Lil Wayne – [No Ceilings] Watch My Shoes Lyrics :)

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